Wednesday, November 17, 2010

New Script


Gigolo Script

Characters:

Jenny – College student in her early 20’s. In a relationship with Savannah that is getting exponentially more abusive emotionally and she is scared it will soon become physical. Does not want to break-up/ leave Savannah.

Savannah – Goes to the same college as Jenny, knows she is out of control but is helpless to stop it. Paranoid that Jenny will cheat on her and leave her. She is controlling and insensitive.

John – Neighbor who lives in the same dorm and is aware via hearsay of what is going on between the two women. Becomes overly heroic and macho in the face of domestic violence. Naïve and hopeful for a relationship with Jenny.

Scene opens panning from Jenny to Savannah in the bed together after having had sex. Jenny looks content but is apprehensive. Savannah is turned facing the wall, she rolls over and looks at Jenny then her room. A close up is shown, she has deep bags under her eyes.

Savannah attempts to fondle Jenny under the covers but Jenny pushes her away.

Jenny: I have to go to class soon.
Savannah: When?
Jenny: We can’t right now-

Jenny get’s out of the bed and starts to dress.

Savannah: Why not?
Jenny: Calm down.
Savannah: I am calm.
Jenny: OK then.

Jenny is fully dressed and we can hear her putting something else on in the background, Savannah sits up and puts her shirt on then starts looking at the rest of the room.

Savannah: Why is this picture over here?
Jenny: What picture?
Savannah: It’s always on your desk, why is over here?
Jenny: I don’t know, it’s just a picture.
Savannah: Did you move it? Did someone else move it?
Jenny: Don’t start this again.
Savannah: Just tell me and I’ll drop it.
Jenny: I’m not-
Savannah: Tell me!

Savannah has moved into her personal space threateningly. Jenny backs towards the door.

Jenny: Stop it! Get out! Now! (She says while going out into the hallway followed by Savannah who has now put the picture frame down.)
Savannah: TELL ME WHO HE IS! I KNOW YOU’RE WITH SOMEONE ELSE! (They are now exiting the hallway into the living room.)
Jenny: There. Is. No one. Else. (Jenny says reaching the dorm door)

Savannah makes eye contact with Jenny, her breathing quickens and she begins to get closer to her face.

Savannah: You went somewhere last night. Where did you go?

Jenny stays silent and resolute, and starts opening the door for her to leave.
Savannah suddenly shuts the door with Jenny still trying to open it. There is a jump-shot at this instant of the door shutting from outside and someone walking down the stairs. Screaming and pounding on the door is heard from outside. The passerby is John, who goes up to the door wondering what is going on. Both females are screaming inside. Jenny opens the door again for her to leave, John rushes in and pushes Savannah down, pinning her on the ground with his hands on her throat and shoulders. Savannah becomes even more angered.

John: You motherfucker!
Savannah: (Choking)
Jenny: You don’t know what you’re doing! Stop!

Jenny’s voice cannot be heard with the yelling between John and Savannah. Savannah kicks him and scratches him, further infuriating him. He starts to punch her brutally, and she gets knocked out. Jenny is still trying to pull him back from her, and he finally relents. He gets up slowly and turns towards her. Once he gets up Jenny runs to Savannah and tries to help her.

Jenny: (screaming) What have you done!? Why would you just come here and do this?!?!
John: She was hurting you! I heard it!
Jenny: She didn’t hurt me! It may have sounded that way but she would never hurt me!
John: She did! She’s done it before too.
Jenny: You don’t know what you’re talking about.
John: Yes I do. She’s insane, she’s hit you-
Jenny: No-
John: Yes, you two argue all the time, she’s been trying to control you. You shouldn’t be with a person like that.
Jenny: (scared and concerned, still clinging to Savannah) What!?
John: (Flashes a creepy smile and has a wild glint in his eye)I love you Jenny. Why don’t you be with me?
Jenny: (starts backing towards the kitchen looking horrified)
John: Where are you going?!?!

Jenny quickly gets off the floor and runs to the kitchen. John follows her at a slow and deliberate pace. We see Jenny run up the stairs to her room and open a door at the top, cut to John walking through the kitchen and taking a kitchen knife. John begins to walk up the stairs, and there is a POV of him walking up the stairs cutting to a POV of a different day as Jenny walks down the sidewalk towards her house. The POV is low and partially hidden by bushes, we are watching as Jenny walks towards her house. Cut again as he reaches the top stair and turns toward the door and opens it. Cut again to the same POV and setting as he walks behind her normally and she begins to turn her head. Cut to John turning the door knob of the room and a high angle of him entering the bathroom is seen, it is dark and the only place to hide is a standing shower which is darkly lit.

Cut to his hands flicking the light switch to find that there is no one inside. He rushes out of the bathroom and goes into the bedroom looking for her, turning his head slowly until he sees a window open. He goes toward the open window. Cut to him walking onto the roof from outside. Another cut as he walks past the patio and Savannah welcomes Jenny. Another cut and he is closing in on Jenny at the edge of  the roof. Jenny is cowering from him as he closes in with the knife, he closes in and we see a pov of his hands coming towards her when there is a sharp fade to a different setting. The setting is in the school and Jenny is getting up from a seat behind John, when she looks over his shoulder and sees him flipping through a sketchbook and there are many photographs and pictures of Jenny inside it, which Jenny sees.

Wednesday, November 10, 2010

1. Script

Gigolo Script

Synopsis:
A girl sells sexual favors in order to pay for her tuition. Other girl saves her from her abusive male John. This is a drama/action film.

Note: Passerby 2 is male. The Man's character will now be a woman, there will not be cross-dressing.

Script:
The film opens with a voice over before the title.

Girl: I do it because I need the money I don't need sex. I just want  go to school.
Pan to a girl half-covered in bed, a shirtless man suddenly joins her.

Man: You ready for another round? (Man puts his hands on her arms)
Girl: It'll be extra. (Girl cringes at his touch, begins to slide away from him)
Man: Put this one on the house. (Man insists keeping his hands on her)
Girl: Now it's two hundred extra. (Girl gets out of bed, starts to dress)
Man: Get back here. (Man sits up and looks at her defiantly)
Girl: Actually, I just remember I have some homework to do, so can you leave now? (Girl is looking away from him, at the door)

Man: Fuck homework. (Man puts his legs over the edge of the bed and beckons her with hands.)

Girl: NO. (Girl opens her room door for him to leave)

Man: Okay, you'll take 50 won't you? (Wide shot to see both of them.)

Girl: Get out of my house. (girl goes out dorm room door into hallway, headed for door.)

Man has shirt in his hand, gives threatening eye contact following her. Girl walks down hallway anxiously. Girl reaches the door barely keeping composure. Man grabs her wrists and slams her against the door.

Man: Sometimes you need to give out a freeby or two, don't you know economics?

 Man begins to physically beat her. Close up of man getting into her face.
Setting changes to outside the dorm room door, sounds can be heard from the other side. Passerby walking down stairwell can hear her screams. Passerby looks and goes up to door, but then leaves. On the other side of the door, the girl slumps down to the bottom of the door and there is a close-up of her hand, followed by a close-up of the door handle.

Man: I dare you to touch it, bitch. (Shot seen from the girl's perspective.)

The next shot is of her hand curling around the door handle. Switch from that to a shot from the side of the man kneeing her in the chin. Next shot is or is nearly floor level and is of the girl hitting the ground. The guy begins to unbuckle his pants and walk towards the girl when the door swings opening hitting him. The passerby is pushing on the otherside, but the guy begins to overtake her. Girl on the floor crawls forward and kicks his ankle/shin. The man is hit and recoils in pain, letting the passerby in. The passerby when inside turns away from the door, and is facing the man. Man reaches for door, but instead pushes passerby down. A floor shot at an angle sees the girl crawl under the table, or get up on the other side of the table. The next shot is of her holding a knife from the man's perspective. A close-up of the man. The passerby knocks the knife from her hand, and the man picks it up and backs out of the door.

Man: You tell anyone shit, I'll fuck you both up!

Man flees out of the door, Passerby follows him saying,

Passerby: Hell no!

Passerby chases him downstairs and then to his car. They pass by another man going up the stairwell. The man reaches the car and gets in before the first passerby can stop him. This shot is seen from the  parking lot and towards the back of the car. He revs the engine, this shot is seen from the passenger seat, with the man in the foreground and the passerby seen through the driver-side window. He goes to press the gas, but the man passerby is blocking his way. He makes direct eye contact, the viewer anticipates that the Man may run him down, then the other passerby comes from the passenger-side door and beats the man in the front seat. The other guy drags her from beating him further.

Passerby 2: Stop! Stop!

Girl comes down from stairwell with cellphone. Intense tension between Passerby and girl is evident. Passerby nods and walks by her, over the shoulder angle. Passerby 2 is seen from the other 2-shot opening the door and taking the guy out of the car. Both passerby and Girl sit on curb.

2. Breakdown the Script

A. # of Actors required: 4

B. # of scenes and length of time Actors must commit: 

Girl = All scenes, <5minutes
Man = All scenes, <5minutes
Passerby = 2 scenes, <3mintues
Passerby 2 = 1 scene, <1minutes

C.# of Locations: 2 

1. Dorm Room
2. Stairwells & Parking Lot

D.Stunts:
<15 fighting stunts <2 Knife stunts

Fighting stunts will involve minor punches/kicks/slapping. No special effects needed.

E. Costumes:

Man = 1 button-up shirt.

Girl = Regular preppy-ish clothes.

Makeup:

Fight Make-up needed.

F. Props:

1. Kitchen knife


3. Location Scout
Setting is a dorm room.(This is a Metz dorm room)
Note: It will not be so messy in the film.

(I am considering editing out the parking lot scenes)

5. Storyboard














6. # of days shooting = 1 Day primarily, 1 Day spare.

7. Spreadsheet Schedule


8. Contact Sheet:

     Actors, Stnad-bys, & Crew

Aspen Aten - 502-939-5491
Stephanie Black - Facebook Only/ Roomate
Nick Brinker - 901-487-7118
Kaitlyn Chandler - 901-233-5952
Nialah - 504-442-0127
Evie Crowder - 901-674-0960
Travis Fowler - 479-857-4020
Trista Vercher - 901-573-0937

Self-Critique

Now that I've been informed that the death, guns, and roses project is going to be a short, individual project I'm probably going to change the pitch significantly. It will no longer be about gigolos but the same theme will be employed. It will be about a college girl who sells her body to pay for tuition and her abusive male John.

1."$leep Around""No Death, No roses" "$EX"
2.Violence and Chase scenes.
3. Original source = Always had the idea. Unrequited love is interesting to me.
4.Inspired/Affected
5. New Synopsis:

Film opens with Girl in bed, having just had sex with a man. Man and woman have dispute. Man gets abusive, Girl attempts to escape. Passerby comes to her rescue and fights at climax with man.

6. Action/Drama
7. What does the inclusion of Gigolos add to the piece? Is the domestic violence physical? Not really well developed.
8. Now that we know it's just gonna be individual, I think I'll make it shorter. I also want to address a realism that is used in serious film making.